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« Reply #60 on: May 20th, 2008, 10:22pm »

Draegan, while not expecting the retaliatory strike, still had a knife in his other hand. As Jones released his punch, Draegan slammed his cleaver into the man's wrist, still taking the brunt of the blow to his cheek. He stepped backward, nearly falling over, grimacing against the pain. "You don't mess with a lady's face, psycho," he said, and twisted the knife before pulling it away. Aiming his gun behind him in self-defense, he dashed down the worm's hole after Eva.
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« Reply #61 on: May 21st, 2008, 01:45am »

Perhaps V would have allowed this to end more peacefully should they had followed his instructions originally, but now it was too late. He did not let up his attack, he followed Marius even as he stumbled backwards in his daze. Followed him until he stopped to allow another person pass him. Soon to be a painful, if not fatal mistake.

He prepared for another sword thrust, this time, should the thrust miss he would not stop his momentum. Instead, he would follow through the movement and put all of his weight against him, flailing out with any limbs he could, to beat him against the cavern walls.
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« Reply #62 on: May 21st, 2008, 02:51am »

Clay's gun, which he held in his other hand, no longer pointed in Alberrt's direction. The man behind him did not let go despite being slammed into the wall.

Clay tried desperately to bring the gun at an angle to shoot the man's ankle or foot in hopes he would let go. Yet, it was near impossible for the man held him around the neck and limited the angle he could bend down.

Instead, Clay cocked the hammer of his Colt peacemaker with his thumb and brought the barrel around, with one hand, so it pointed at his own chest.

He stuck the barrel into his arm pit until he felt the tip protrude out the other end.

Clay pulled the trigger.

"BLAM!" the gun reported.

The special bullet he had loaded for Albert. Clay had cored it out. In the center Clay had put a speck of dysentery contaminated poop that he had received from one of the town's practicing physicians.

The bullet had been coated in wax to keep the live culture from being misplaced.

Clay felt the hot barrel of the gun in his pit as the bullet traveled somewhere, somwhere behind him.

Did he hit his target?, he waited for a moan.
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« Reply #63 on: May 21st, 2008, 4:21pm »

He heard a gun shot then the sound of Albert moving towards him. Marius realized he had made a mistake. He looked back and saw the thrust of the sword heading straight towards him. Marius ducked quickly watching the sword go over his head. He then moved his sword at a angle so that if Albert kept his movements up. He would be stabbed in the neck.
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« Reply #64 on: May 21st, 2008, 4:34pm »

Greg Wright moaned in pain as the bullet hit him. He wasnt supposed to be hurt. Something wasnt right. He looked at Clay and then slowly fell backwards onto the ground. He then saw the cripple battling Albert. His stomach bled more and more.

"PROTECT THE CAVE PROTECT ME!!!!!!" Greg shouted angrily at Jones. Greg knew how to manipulate others. That was what kept him alive for so long. That was when he heard something he hadnt for a while. He no longer heard whispering instead he heard nothing. It was silience. This had happened before to someone else. When we lost the pointer. He stopped hearing master. Greg's face turned pale and he looked at Clay.

"hurry up and blow up the mine" Greg said coldly. Looking up at Clay. He wouldnt go out without a bang.
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« Reply #65 on: May 21st, 2008, 4:44pm »

Mr. Jones looked over at Greg. Then he heard something give him orders. He diddnt know what it was. Did he think of it. Or was it something else. Mr. Jones realized it was best to ignore the man who claimed to be his master. Instead he followed the new orders he had been given. He charged at Albert and began to moving his arms randomly attempting to punch him enough to distract him. That way Marius could escape the cave.
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« Reply #66 on: May 21st, 2008, 8:40pm »

Albert was not slowed by Marius' attempt at stopping him. Instead of the desired effect, the fine point of the sword slid of the neck guard of his armor, giving only a faint scratch due to its much higher density and thickness.

Albert launched himself completely on top of Marius, who was now nearly enveloped as he ducked, making him even smaller.He began to let louse with a flurry of blows from knees, feet, elbows, fists, and head butts alike. In quarters this close there would be little chance of escape, forcing a person to fight his way out instead.
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« Reply #67 on: May 21st, 2008, 11:01pm »

Clay was never moved by a sense of compassion, and he never would be, but watching and hearing Marius fighting for his life, and seeing his hand picked deputies flee, he felt an immense sense of failure.

Clay was moved only by duty, and he felt he had failed at his duty to enforce the law of Clauden.

As far as Clay knew Dragean, Eva, and his son, had began navigating deep into the worm hole, or had already navigated it as in Travis's case.

Clay watched Mr. Jones head to Albert to be slaughtered no doubt.

"Should have never come out of retirement, too damn old and arthritic for this."

The remaining left in the cave were Albert, the most wanted man in Clauden, Marius, a likely killer of innocent people, Greg, a cult leader psycho, and Mr. Jones, who nearly got Travis killed.

And Clay thought, of course himself, the sheriff. "yup, I'm the sheriff. Everone in these here mines are felony criminals, and it seems on the outside I just don't have the means to stop them."

Clay took his gun belt off and dropped it to the mine floor, "Always toll' ma I wouldn't die with no guns on. "

Clay reached into his pockets and took out a samll box of sulphur matches.

He lit one illuminating Mr. Jones approach to Albert and Marius clashing steel with albert. Clay saw the hulking creature Albert with his massive sword.

Clay with no weapon in hand blindsided Albert with a puch shattering his fist on the side of his steel head. The only desired affect Clay thought it would have was to get Albert's attention.

"These mines here are private property. Yar all tresssspasssin' Ya have the right to remain silent."

Clay struck a hanful of matches flinging them to the hill of powder.

At the same time Clay flung himself tackle mode into Albert.

The shaodows and darkness of the mine surrendered as the kegs of powder erupted.

In Jean's arms Cole Hallow began to erupt in a fit of crying.



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« Reply #68 on: May 22nd, 2008, 3:52pm »

Marius saw the Albert fall on top of him. So this was the end he thought. He looked desperately at Clay Hallow. Who was running at Albert. He heard a crack of bones. Then he heard Clay speaking. He was going to blow the cave down. Instead of struggling Marius decided to make peace.

"god have mercy on us all" Marius said he heard crashing and bangs. The mine was collapsing. BANG! everything went black. He saw his home. He saw the love of his life Elaina. He saw the pain of his past. He saw the people he killed. He felt the need to repay the debt. To change what he had done. He had done all he could to make things right. He saw Roland. Then he saw all of their faces. A flaming carriage pulled up and he gladly stepped inside of it. Then he saw nothing.

"god have mercy on us all"
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« Reply #69 on: May 22nd, 2008, 4:01pm »

Mr. Jones saw Clay lighting the match. Quickly Mr. Jones sprinted towards the tunnel. He heard the explosion and felt himself go flying. Luckily he landed at the edge of the tunnel. He started crawling at first and then he started to run towards the exit.
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« Reply #70 on: May 22nd, 2008, 4:08pm »

"I have saved the WORLD!!!!" Greg shouted proudly. Then something that he heard something that would haunt him. He heard the familar voice whispering in his ear 'good work.' Greg's face turned pale a rock landed on his head and everything went black.
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« Reply #71 on: May 22nd, 2008, 4:13pm »

Eva heard the explosion and had to stop momentarily.
"Bridget? Are you in here? Something just happened," she called back worriedly.
"Did the sheriff make it in? What about the other deputy?"
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« Reply #72 on: May 22nd, 2008, 4:31pm »

"help me the others are still down there...." Mr. Jones said wearily crawling up the tunnel. As he heard Eva's voice. He diddnt hear the voice anymore. He was free from it's influence. He was free atlast to live his life. Before it felt as if he was being watched. Before he felt that he was a captive in his own body. For once sighed a sigh of relief.
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« Reply #73 on: May 22nd, 2008, 8:16pm »

((OOC: Jones's wrist should be thoroughly mutilated right now.))

"Kid, your hand is nearly off... wait... still down there?" Draegan said worriedly, hands shaking. "No... you don't mean Clay was... Oh, bugger it all!" His knife clattered to the tunnel floor, his gun following shortly after, and then himself. "No," he said, and then let loose a wailing sob, covering his face with his hands. "That impotent wretch! That... that disgrace to the office of Sheriff!" He cried into the sleeve of his dress, pounding the ground with his other hand. "He's dead and left me to his job! And that... that Albert, or V, or whatever..." He lifted his tear-and-makeup-stained face, turning to Eva. "We led him here..." he broke down and fell forward onto the rocky ground, barely avoiding his weapons.
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« Reply #74 on: May 22nd, 2008, 9:24pm »

(((Wow Dragean. That is a very touching scene you just composed. Tears are coming out of my face when I am reading it and I don't cry.)

<<Well, Draegan is a rather hot-blooded, emotional drag queen. Cyril's probably happy Clay's dead.>>
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